本人高考全国一卷 14512 月四级 684这篇教大家搞定英语作文这件事

首先不要背模板不要背模板阅卷老师眼睛毒的很如此流水线式的作文基本 20/25 分封顶

要知道得分技巧就必须了解高考阅卷机制并投其所好从前我也以为这些信息对考生没有用直到大考吃了哑巴亏

高考作文的采分主要分为以下几个要素题目格式书写语法篇幅语体前面是基础往后是重头戏句式词汇饱满度层次与流利度修辞——按对考生水平要求由低到高顺序——另外还有一点阅卷人感受

下面展开详谈一切以全国卷老高考为例全面解构高考作文不限于句词新高考本质不变

题目

如果有要求千万不要忘记写题目这点极大地牵涉到留给阅卷老师地第一印象虽然不是什么大事但如果翻车就不是小事了

题目第一行居中简短有力不要废话——题目不是正文破题就完事了

第一个词和最后一个词首字母要大写在此基础上一般实词首字母大写动词名词形容词副词代词虚词首字母小写连词介词冠词但长度超过 5 个字母的介词要大写如 beneath, between, regarding 等

但一个现实问题是阅卷老师有一定可能不完全知道这些规则他还以为你在量子大小写

咱是要饭的得跪着那么题目就别那么复杂首尾都用实词虚词别那么多幺蛾子An Adventure of Mine, 横竖挑不出毛病

同时题目必须完全契合内容内容是学生会通知就不要企图玩火操作一个”Notice“就说明白了

如果还要追求完美题目可以化用一些英文世界的名言或成语如果阅卷人看的出来那就赚爆形成了玩梗者之间的默契即使看不出来经典的语言看起来也会很简洁有力一样增加了印象分比如命题是倡导环保桑伯格狂喜那题目就可以是 Let’s Heal the World相信不会有英语从业者没听过 MJ注意这一条仅建议稳 140+的考生使用如果操作不慎极易翻

格式

格式和题目一样都是最基本的要素同理没有太大操作空间注意不出错就好

1.书信最常见的作文体裁开头 Dear结尾 yours不再赘述

注意写给谁——别笑血的教训题目中给出 Peter 或 editor 还好处理但收信人身份姓名均不明确时一定要谨慎最常见的是 Dear sir or madam严防死守毫无破绽不要假定性别中国不讲政治正确但英语文化讲这不是玩笑Attention我们小班高二第一次月考时 2/3 的同学因为不会写 madam 吃过亏这种错误是致命的如果放在高考自求多福吧

Dear 套完近乎再如何操作才能抓人眼球后面得体和句式板块会有例子详谈

书信体最后一段一定要简短有力收束全文事实上大多数文章都应该如此最后秀一把让打分者再奶一口这点我也会在后面得体和句式板块再谈到这里不多说

yours 后面我习惯加 faithfully反正不放过一切上分机会

最后署上事儿精 Li Hua

2.演讲稿

常见开头ladies and gents, may I have your attention please?

我喜欢的What a nice day, ladies and gents? Today I’d like to talk about……

中间靠后部分最好有表达主题的总结句比如 Hence, I appeal to all of us to……

结尾 thank u for ur time,礼貌得体

3.通知

没有称呼直接进入文章注意通知发布者一般不是个人所以不要开头 I’m Li Hua, president of SU.

第一人称处尽量用 we

结尾署上通知单位和通知时间通知时间要早于文中提起过的 deadline 时间

书写

高考作文给分十分玄学的一大原因就是书写在电子屏幕上任何缺点都会成倍放大字迹潦草的话那么 18/25 乃至 16/25 就是你的天花板因为没有人在汗流浃背拼命赶工的情况下会对一份看起来不讨喜的文章产生任何一点同情反之亦然一手漂亮的衡水体赏心悦目得分会至少比同水平的作文高出 2-3 分

但毕竟不是人人都能练出衡水体答主本人确实也不能捂脸那么请记住你的字可以不漂亮但一定要工整不影响阅读不要连笔不要花体不要有涂改如果卡这个标准至少不会白白丢分

屏摄自高中同学优秀作文作者是上次评论区里的口嗨怪@之北之南今天爷就是要挂你还不给版权费

如果能做到这样子已经很不错了不是标准衡水体但绝对工整看起来赏心悦目不影响信息获取

语法

语法这个问题太大了时态语态主被动主谓一致非谓动宾前状后非限定虚拟倒装逻辑性……这都是高压线还有——句子不要罗列很多人犯这个大忌一个句号或叹号或问号内只能容忍一套主谓and but 这种另说引爆一处18 分以下两处15 不保这时候你玩不玩手法秀不秀操作已经不重要了因为没有人会再去看

也就是我们老师说的硬伤致命伤

这个问题其实没什么好说的语法功夫在平时不要有赌徒心理

高三时会有人发生高原反应——连最基本的语法项都产生动摇其实说到底还是基础不扎实高三上半年期末同桌陈某英语滑铁卢其中作文仅得十二分

我看的第一眼I’m Li Hua, who am interested in……统一回复:am 的搭配主语只有 I这里 who 代值 Li Hua且 who am 不奇怪吗……

……

他瞪着一双呆萌的眼睛Li Hua 就是我用 am 怎么了……

他的字还很潦草老师看了你这作文要是落我手里还想要 128 分都没有

后来此君得一雅号陈十二郎

此次惨案有史为证就是韩愈那篇著名的祭十二郎文

篇幅

高考作文说是 100 词左右实则大有讲究

1.宏观上正文部分要 3 段 11-12 行左右包括因回车产生的空白答题区剩余 1 行半是最好状态剩多剩少感观上给人以字数不达标之感——尽管阅卷人知道你字数合格肉眼计数很准不要怀疑整体感观不佳仅仅是个人写字过小或过大的结果但还是会扣分

每行 9-11 词过多字数会超过少会被判定为恶意凑字后果很严重词与词间 1-1.5 个字母的距离开头要简洁有力两行到三行过多的话四行及以上阅卷人会敏锐地觉察到你的语言过于臃肿简洁度太差得分会很难看这点很致命

2.微观上7-8 句话解决战斗3 短 4 长或 5 长

短句做必要的信息推动润滑这点在讲流利度时会再次提到完成无法秀操作的信息点同时给读者阅读时喘息的机会长短合理搭配效果惊人 阅卷人感受方面会再次提到短句用得得体地道优势不输于长句

长句是传统意义上重武器show time各显神通的地方句式方面再谈

推荐 2+4+1 或 2+4+2 或 2+5+1 的布局每个加数分别对应开头中间或结尾的句数

一套下来字数将精准控制在 110-115 之间

辅以工整的书写给人的第一感觉会十分 nice让阅卷人心动的第一步已经完成

语体重头戏开始了

1.语气

语气要契合假定情景与身份求助自荐演讲之类要适当 humble投诉信要足够 tough人家考砸司马脸给他灌一碗看起来煞有介事言之有物的鸡汤

建议信是重灾区第二自由段的主体部分三句 you 打头u shouldu ought tou r supposed to是中国考生常规操作殊不知看到这种格式阅卷老师乐成了花——不必再看了18 以下

首先三个句子主语完全一致看都不用细看就知道句式结构单一手法必无太大亮点更重要的是这种建议实际上很 rude甚至 offensive——是什么身份才有资格告诉别人应该做 A 做 B 做 CPeter 估计看了得当场断交之谓语气不合格较好的替代表达下面就在下面

2.得体

要设身处地地同情 Peter.即使敷衍也要得体地敷衍

建议信一种大环境是 Peter 遇到困难很丧那么回信的开端就理所应当是抚慰性质的语言

大多数考生的抚慰看起来十分塑料然而若是操作得当便看起来十分得体让阅卷人眼睛一亮这就是老师说的在不犯错误的基础上骑脸输出原地把阅卷人唬住

下面举例

Dear Peter

I’m terribly sorry to know that you’re having a tough time battling Internet addiction. In fact, such problems are actually pretty common among teenagers. Nevertheless, the situation is not definitely irreversible.

31 词三行左右一长两短开头段就很漂亮地结束了选词和句式先不论单看得体性terribly sorry 很地道一个 terribly 把同情程度提升许多宾语从句陈述客观题干情景这也是需要涵盖的要点否则按要点缺少降档处理后面给 teenagers 都扣上个大锅宽慰效果大幅提升Peter 也就不会觉得自己太 loser记住他是你的朋友你的目的是宽慰+建议+鼓励最后一句 Nevertheless 画风一转告诉他还有戏只要按哥们我说的做无缝契合下一段建议内容

下一段是主体部分长枪大炮齐鸣处三句建议不要 you you you委婉一些Peter 正玻璃心着呢

It would be a brilliant choice to……

You may as well……

It also helps if you….

Nothing can match ……when it comes to….. Thus , …….

Why not……? This will undoubtedly……

After thinking twice, Id like to recommend…..(to serve as…..)

随机组合六选三加以适当润滑就完事了切记内容要言之有物推荐某种活动必须有相应的 ground 来支否则便是大忌无论词藻何等华美句法写的多么天花乱坠不得打分超过 18

前 80-90 词都这么有料了最后一段 I wish 就草草收场未免太过没有排面想想办法最后干他娘的一炮

The whole process of transformation tastes bitter, but its fruit is sweet. I believe there’s bound to be a bright future ahead awaiting you.

24 词漂亮收笔这么一画大饼Peter 估计都快感动枯了岂不美汁儿汁儿

婉拒也很棘手现给出一例开头和分析

Dear Peter,

I hate to say sorry, but the frustrating fact is that I can’t attend your party, because XXX.(简述理由一般下段展开Thus, though reluctant, I can’t but decline your kind invitation.

反复重申自己的不情愿和无奈下一段再展开写婉拒原因重点选择的原因不可草率不然让人感到被轻视比如要去看电影要去逛街甚至要去另一个朋友的 birthday party——统统很不得体找一些说服性强的理由如远方亲戚突然来访自己的数学奥赛决赛在即母亲生病自己需要照顾等等

结尾可再次 apologize要是能提出补偿措施则更锦上添如建议来自己家里再来一次 party 一起弥补错失的快乐时光

此之谓得体

句法

啊 已经 5000 多字了才慢慢进入高阶竞技

句法问题太庞杂我主要列举几种我常用的出彩句型

1.前盖帽

描述人物法宝

Knowledgeable and enthusiastic, hes definitely competent for this demanding post.

Highly competent and energetic, my mom earned her reputation due to her incredible dedication to math-teaching.

Always in high spirits, the new employee soon let everyone feel the warmth between strangers.

2.后打桩

替代非限的绝佳选择

In the meanwhile, McDonalds offers a place where we receive what we order more or less immediately, thus largely saving us from the trouble of shopping and cooking.

这是我大一英文课堂演讲的演讲稿节选状语从句和伴随状语的搭配使意群在最浓缩的篇幅上涵盖了最大的信息这种功夫是阅卷人想见到的

The unexpected power failure affected most blocks in New York City, crippling peoples normal life to a great extent.

3.中间善用同位的

同位语和插入语的使用使长句化整为零避免了信息的臃肿降低了意群体积但又自然地插入了次要信息同时让读者感受到作者对语言的掌控力和娴熟度

In 2018, Donald Trump, president of USA, signed a series of commercial sanctions towards several Chinese firms, which triggered a long-lasting trade war.

Driven by uncontrollable fury, William Wallace, together with other Scouts, started a rebellion against the tyrant, aiming to win the final liberation through violence.

4.高级非限

非限定性定语从句已经烂大街了毕竟万物皆可 which 从但介词+which 的搭配还是足以出众的

Hence, we appeal to people from all walks to contribute their efforts, without which we can hardly manage the rescue program.

I’d like to recommend Chernobyl to everyone, through which we can see both the filthiness and brightness of humanity.

5.倒装句

倒装使用好了会使人眼前一亮但不要多一句就够句句倒装那就是不说人话了手动划去

Right in the center of the city stands a monument built in memory of those who sacrificed their lives in WW2.

Young as he looks, hes already embarked upon his second doctors degree.(谢耳朵本耳

Under no circumstance should we define ourselves as losers, whenever and wherever we are.应该是奥巴马的名言但精确的原话找不到了我觉得这句话好有力答主本人曾多次引用

6.虚拟语气

虚拟语气和倒装句都是语法大项单独拎出来均可讲上一节课这里仅为了功利化地套分而不做深挖

Supposing I were given this golden chance, I would spare no efforts to strive for a splendid performance.

自荐信最后一段我最喜欢的表达谦卑有礼重申自己的希望后面再 Looking foword to your early reply 即可完美收笔

If you get immersed in an atmosphere where people merely speak English, your potential for oral English would undoubtedly be sparked to the largest scale.

As a matter of fact, you wouldnt have suffered such a huge blow if fully prepared in advance.

这几句分别代表了自荐求职建议信与宽慰信这三种热门考点中虚拟语气的使用潜力尤其第一种 supposing/suppose 或 providing/provided 引导的虚拟语气熟练掌握者十中乏一若能无误而自然地嵌入文章对阅读效果的提升是相当震撼的

7.表达观点的句子

I think 烂大街I firmly hold the belief that 几年来也已经大大贬值

From my perspective/From where I stand, none can damage the environment individually, nor can he purify it.

Personally, I believe that the trip was by no means a worthwhile one/I believe there’s no reason to let this golden chance slip away/it would be an unadvisable choice to reject fast food simply due to unreasoned prejudice.

第二种我太喜欢了副词打头本身就是一亮点personally 的稀有属性又无疑是另一个加分项在建议信安利信忽悠信中用作结尾屡试不爽

8.强调句

强调句最好长度较短否则容易给人尾大不掉头重脚轻之感但正如我所言短句恰到好威力不输长句

From my perspective, it’s the qualities we possess that define who we are, not our social status or wealth.

Every single bit of your efforts does count/make a difference.

词汇 

一讲到高级词汇很多人就恨不得把专八词硬塞进行文如果没有那至少也要是几个字典角落才会看到的长单词来凑数事实上这是对高级词汇这个定义的曲解

词汇的第一要义是 accuracy用的精准贴切恰到好处那么这个词就是一个成功的词反之为了一个词生拉硬拽上一句话甚至对整体行文布局产生动摇都是遣词方面的大忌

词汇的内容同样庞杂答主能力有限只能做到提出一些思路和示例具体应用需在实战和积累中不断摸索

下面分类举例

1.形容词

marvellous, fabulous, magnificent……这种大就完事了的词在高中初期还是很吃得开的至少在高一

但经过一年多的历练其普及性以大大增加价值也随之降低答主用来用去最喜欢用的还是最早掌握的 incredible原因之一是口语中常见适应力强地道后来干脆不在这种形容词上花时间挑选统统 incredible 搞定

形容词的最讨巧的无疑是复合词两词组合往往能产生十分形象的描述效果下面列举

earth-shaking.

The past ten years have witnessed the earth-shaking changes taking place in my hometown.

这个句式可能有点烂大街了但此处比 earthshaking 更完美的形容我至今没有找到

life-changing.

活动事件描述凸显意义之重大多大能 change one’s life

poverty-stricken

吊打 poor, impoverished, underdeveloped. 准确而地道

brightly-colored

亮色的一次考试中很多同学这个概念不会表达

breath-taking

高三后期描述景色专用

life-long

忽悠信安利信中经典的 life-long memories

ever-lasting

永恒的范围受限使用不好会让人感觉很生硬但恰当的话则无可替代The everlasting beauty of Chinese calligraphy.

single-minded

专心致志见词知意

must-see

推荐旅游景点专用

另一类是动词衍生词往往不怎么生僻但可以产生很生动的效果

desirable

advisable

well-equipped

renowned

enlightened

devoteda devoted friend

unnoticed

名词衍生词

groundless

salt-free

最后是一些基本的替换fundamental 替换 significantimmortal 替换 eternal这些比较常见不做展开

2.名词

名词可操作性非常有限因而准确干练就足以完成使命

item.简单但潜力极大吹爆老师在讲解 2018 全国一卷专家团给出的满分作文时前前后后花了 10 分钟花式赞美这个词多么见水准

peak.形容某种状态的巅峰人物描述常用搭配 reach 食用

angle.看事物的角度

desire.高三爱上了 a burning desire 这种说法

target.名词动词均是采分点

ground.证据论据这个意向在 ground 的权威语料库中十分常见也是一种很地道的表达但掌握者依旧寥寥无几

3.动词

活用是动词的最高级形式但注意不是所有非动词均被公认可动用下面是较经典的例子

shape/reshape 

The life-changing experience indeed reshaped his character.

green/green

Its our joint efforts that count in greening our environment.

top

Family union tops Chinese concerns, which largely distinguished our culture from others.

mother

Stop mothering him like a child!

land

Simply landing a job is already an unimaginable challenge for him, not to mention living a decent life.其实这个例子的联系应该和登陆意向更密切些

wolf

After days of starvation, he wolfed down the rotten bird without a second thought.

rocket 

The tribute band soon rocketed to its fame after releasing another album.

trigger

In 2018, Donald Trump, president of USA, signed a series of commercial sanctions towards several Chinese firms, which triggered a long-lasting trade war.

voice

All I want is to voice my idea freely.

shield

The adult penguins gathered in a circle to shield their babies from the extreme cold.

storm

Furious and ashamed, he stormed out without leaving a word.

短语优先是另一大出彩点列举一些非常吃香的组合如下

give rise to

give way to 

cast/throw shadow upon

throw light on

be referred to as

long for

be expected to

make sense of 

be overwhelmed with

come to terms with

agree with(Indian food doesn’t agree with me)

pave the way for

come into being

put……into shade

pop up

roll the dice

well up

lit up

compensate for

kick off开始

wear off

flood onto

miss out on

be bound to

get tough with=crack down upon

be rooted in

be heavy with

fade away

cater for

have a deep insight into

下面一些答主本人非常喜欢的

foster

refresh

inherit

undergo

undertake

purify

overweigh

collaborate

uplift

fascinate

divert

distinguish

digest

soothe

thrill

combat

fulfill

exhaust

stir

stun

blossom

perceive

proceed

tackle

acknowledge感谢)

sustain

maintain

soar

befriend

4.副词

词汇方面最高阶的战斗属于名词和副词但名词可操作性实在太不亲民也不是没有比如 18 年全国一卷 24 分作文那个 item得高分我心服口服

那么就轮到了我最喜欢的副词

副词文章中的作用可以归结为三个方面逻辑润滑生动/准确

1逻辑

表示因果thus,hence,therefore,thereby,accordingly.

表示转折: nevertheless, notwithstanding, whereas, 

等等等等

句子中逻辑的使用使言之有物原则得到满足文章主题内容显得充实饱满句与句间逻辑的使用使文章浑然一体推进自然

比如

To satisfy your appetite for local cuisines, I’d like to recommend Beijing Roast Duck. As for places of interest, the Forbidden City……

打住这边烤鸭话说了半截儿怎么就飞紫禁城去了要问烤鸭哪里好bushi忽悠的这么业余peter 怎么能甘心掏钱

To satisfy your appetite for local cuisines, I’d like to recommend Beijing Roast Duck, since it’s/which is widely referred to as a must-have here. As for places of interest, the Forbidden City……

这一开口才像老传销头子烤鸭吹完再遛您内紫禁城去

2润♂滑

逻辑副词是天然的润滑油然而还有一种副词用法也可以担任这个职责——提至句首

大英课上的副教曾高度评价这种用法地道答主认为这种手法物美价廉性价比感人不需要多么高的语言功底即可装得煞有介事

Surprisingly, the highly expected French army surrendered without much resistence after the germans shifted their aim west.(1/1)

Clearly, the neighbor had no idea what he was going to trigger when he yelled out “Shut the window!”

3生动/准确

其实抛开一切到最后它依旧是一个情感丰富的副词——王家卫

不知道有没有读者注意到试卷中作文题的标准答案第一段十有八九要用一个 totally

I’m totally overwhelmed with……

We are totally unaware of ……

这个词可能是那篇标准 18 分样文里唯一的可取之处了totally 地道且适用性极强是少见的用不烂的词答主推荐

同样是 unaware,我们看看加上副词之后的不同效果

totally unaware

seemingly unaware

obviously unaware

somehow unaware

hardly unaware

可见副词提高了用语的精确性程度从轻到重情感由喜至憎副词均可以顺利完成

配合形容词效果极佳配合短语和句子依然

我们看这个句子

The number of people infected went up to 4000.

好像不太对吧

The number of people infected went up to roughly 4000.

这就是精准性

还有

The country’s bike industry went paralysed, due to the lack of financial support.

看起来不错但可以更好

The country’s bike industry went paralysed, partly due to the lack of financial support.

partly, mainly, mostly 等等词化用在这种句子中修饰了逻辑关系准确之余甚至还有一点丝滑

生动性比准确性更出彩

相信有心的英语学习者一定注意过 freezing cold, boiling hot, icy cold, wide open 这种表达这里的 freezing, boiling, icy, wide 形容词作副词是副词界里的熊猫血将抽象概念具象化其生动性大大提高了文采合理使用可以发挥惊人的效果

即使用不上这几个一些常规操作

The yield of produce decreased sharply, which soon triggered a chain disaster in Indochina.

sharply 放在这个位置活儿干得也很漂亮

下面列一些我本人非常喜欢的另一些副词

thoroughly

definitely=undoubtedly

fully

incredibly

merely

slightly 

largely

seemingly

whole-heartedly

faithfully

sharply

dramatically

indeed

simply

deeply

5. 代词

代词有润滑的作用同时也可避免重复使用固定表达还可以修饰逻辑关系以及降低意群体积是应该被重视的小东西

Spring Festival means a lot to us Chinese. On Spring Festival, we will paste couplets to show our heartfelt expects for good fortune and a prosperous new year.

对比使用代词替代后的效果

Spring Festival means a lot to us Chinese. On this very day, we will paste couplets to show our heartfelt expects for good fortune and a prosperous new year.

这样就成功避免了就成功降低了 Spring Festival 这个词的使用密度

The WW2 claimed countless lives in just a few years. The sacrificed lives indeed forced the whole world to reflect on the future of human beings.

再看看这样写

The WW2 claimed countless lives in just a few years. This indeed forced the whole world to reflect on the future of human beings.

This 连接了前后两句自然过渡同时一个词发挥了三个词的作用精炼不臃肿不重复

饱满度

烤鸭的例子已经说明了何谓言之无物高考作文的核心就是描写无论是场景计划景色经历物品人物方法都绝不能空洞

比如推荐一本书不应该说这本书好啊这本书真的好这本书太好了这本书辣是真的流批你一定要看啊

这是推荐和三流尬吹公众号一个水准

比如推荐一本书他的作者内容故事人物主要情节文笔口碑后世影响开创性特色这么多可谈随便八选三也不至于白给

层次与流利度

层次与流利大部分已经在副词和代词板块渗透过了

这里主要说一说一种可行的文章主题结构

文章的第二段一般也就是主体部分为了达到言之有物的饱满度大约要写三个要点左右如果要点并列或略有递进非常不建议使用 First, second, third 这种冰冷排列句与句之间可取的润滑表达包括

In the meanwhile/Meanwhile,

Plus,(这个存疑不同地区对其认可度不尽相同

Moreover,

What’s more,

Afterward,

On the contrary,

As a consequence,

Furthermore

Additionally/In addition to……

Besides,

等等等等当然按需选取

十一修辞

山东阅卷标准是只有在看到修辞的情况下才会给出 24

也就是说修辞是写作中的金字塔顶

但无奈其修辞可操太低如果没有 22-23 分的水平强行操作几乎必翻车

比如非要把月亮比作白玉盘中文语境中是挺美但英文硬翻 The moon looks like a white plate made of jade 就很 weird

因为这不是英文世界里的思维方式

答主在大考中也不敢横跳只能规矩地使用老师批准过的几种安全的表达

Chinese calligraphy is undoubtedly an eternal shining pearl in the treasure of traditional culture.

May the flower of our friendship blossom forever.

I was almost drowned in the sea of loneliness.

Never lose faith in yourself, because there’s always a rainbow awaiting you after a storm.

再次重申修辞适用人群极其有限可操作性极低不建议花费过多心思

十二阅卷人感受

书写篇幅长短句结合避免把读者憋死已经在前文说过

这里提最后一点阅卷人也是中国人在极其有限的阅卷时间内他可能也摆脱不了中式英语的思维

significant 我们要知道他的第二个意向是明显防备完型阴招但作文中不要这样用

如果要表达这个意思obvious, apparent, clear随便挑选

在作文中significant 大概率是重要阅卷人也难免思维固化如果他把重要的意向带入你的句子中阅读必然逻辑不通在 6-7 秒的时间内他不会多加思考

让他不舒服就是错

找谁说理

所以大多数英语老师都会说高考要用常用词汇的常见含义

十三回复一些问题

1.我是学长植物

2.啊啊啊啊啊啊啊评论和私信好多萌新受宠若惊但我最近实在回复不过来了大家如果有问题精练一点私信解决我会尽量回复

3.文中所写英文句子大多没有注释这是笔者的习惯因为我学习英语习惯在英语环境中进行所以也就没有翻译的习惯我写作的过程不是汉译英而是直接列出英文要点的提纲再进行展开所以即使让我翻译也不免一股机翻味捂脸我翻译是真的不行

而且我一直相信语言不是喂出来的自己求助牛津朗文韦氏科林斯的过程是不可少的我进入高中时买了一本缩印版的牛津高阶三年之后已经被翻软了只有不断地与这种权威语料互动才能最大程度地丰富自己的知识储备真正做到举一反三

再说这也没有几个超纲词汇啊……

4.刷题高考必刷题五三天利 38 套真题但我不鼓励英语刷题先把做过的题进行回顾工作量已经不小了犯不上盲目追求数量

5.有的学弟学妹想听完型和阅读这个一言两语说不清楚等我找机会会去专门的问题下回答

6.有人和我要我高中素材但基友已经先下手抢走拿去加拿大复习雅思了我手头只有三篇大一上半年的作文篇幅略长词汇稍微超出高考范围语言文风有些厚重不太适合高考如果大家觉得还不算没用尽可以拿去

Music and Me

Having been a faithful fan of the Beatles for nearly five years, sometimes I can still be amazed by how infectious their every single song can be. Yet when it comes to my favorites, Hey Jude would definitely be on the top of the list.

This song, originally written for Julia Lennon, was a gift from Paul McCartney. In the song Paul reminded Julia to always look at the bright side of life, despite the messy divorce his parents were going through. Because as he put it, we ought to pursue happiness with invincible perseverance, since dreams are achievable if we go for them. When released to the public in 1967, Hey Jude became an instant hit. Apparently, this magical song has successfully brought hope to not only Julia himself, but also universal people who lived under the tension of Cold War.

I first listened to it back in 2015 when I faced the same trouble as Julia. Nevertheless, the words from McCartney felt so comforting, which indeed inspired me to proceed. Additionally, it dawned on me that care from our beloved ones- friends, family, lover- is exactly the strongest shield we can have. And maybe just as the saying goes, when life hands us lemons, we make lemonade.

My Family

There are totally four members in my family. My mother works as a tutor while my father is an official in the government. And my brother, who’s just six years old, is an adorable trouble maker.

Highly competent and energetic, my mom earned everyone’s respect due to her incredible dedication to math-teaching. Apart from simply being a successful teacher at school, she’s a brilliant guide for me as well, offering priceless advice whenever needed. The qualities I inherited from her- perseverance, diligence, tolerance, etc.- are exactly the most invaluable tools that I ever owned, which have really diverted the track of my life.

Contrary to my mother, my dad is far from a talkative person. Nevertheless, the old saying ‘Actions speak louder than words’, I think, is surely the best interpretation for his life.

The relationship between me and my parents is purely democratic. Unavoidably, there are times when conflicts occur, since such a thing as ‘generation gap’ does exist. But instead of quarreling meaninglessly, we tend to settle down our differences through face-to-face conversations. Thus, the warmth within beloved ones can always melt the ice built by misunderstanding.

Personally, I believe that home is a place where our souls belong. Together, we went through thick and thin, which overweighs anything else to me.

Are They Really Junks?

For so many years, we have been brainwashed with the idea that fast food, often symbolized by hamburgers or pizzas, is detrimental to our bodies. But have we ever given it a second thought–is this true?

I’ve been reflecting on this question for days. Finally, though reluctant to admit it myself, I’d still like to voice my viewpoint—- criticism as mentioned is far from being objective.

Hamburgers and pizzas have long been accused of containing too many calories, which, as opponents put it, can easily cause obesity. Nevertheless, this negative side is actually being over-exaggerated. As a matter of fact, excessive intake of any form of food poses a potential threat to our health, and apparently fast food is definitely not the only one to blame. Moreover, authority tests have already proven fast food ” safe” as long as the raw materials are fresh, let alone the products we purchase at big chains.

As far as I’m concerned, despite the fierce attack from mainstream media, those so called ” junk food” will remain popular in the predictable future when modern life becomes more and more fast-paced. Cleary, our time to gather around the family table has largely given way to struggling with endless assignments in the office. In the meanwhile, McDonald’s offers a place where we receive what we order more or less immediately, saving us from the trouble of shopping and cooking. This convenience equips fast food with one matchless strength—-it suits our lifestyle just fine. And personally, I believe that it would be unadvisable to reject it simply due to unreasoned prejudice. 

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看来天下学生党苦英语久矣

最后唱一首黑猪祝各位尤其是高中的学弟学妹们永远保持心底心底的一片光明出处见水印

 
 
 

 

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